The Lilly Pond
There was once a farther who likes to go fishing in a lake with his daughter Louise the daughter is very active and her brother Jamie like going out. To go fishing with dad Gorge they sow the lake they like to go fishing but it’s too far to walk for Louise so they went to a pond it is beautiful there it got lodes of Lilly’s and animals. They all went there they spend the whole day the there. And night they camped out sided to see the wild life. They woke up early and went for a walk they sow stunning animals in the park. The wild life were up and moving It’s also a park. Jamie likes it so does the others. They fed the animals and looked around they ate lunch there too. Outside with the animals . And walked around Louise said I can’t feel my legs and fell down. Gorge rushed next to her so did Jamie . Jamie rang the ambulce and took her to hospital . The doctor said were so sorry to tell you this but Louise got cancer were so sorry .
End of Part one .
The Canal
They walked to the canal to clear there heard and talk about what will happen next. Louise said am scared I know Jaime took her hand and said everything will be ok were all here for you. You’re the one where have to be around with all the time. They sat down for a picnic and talk but Louise said can we talk about something else now ok sorry its fine but don’t remind me all the time. Ok Louise went off by herself she went back to the park nobody knew where she went and needed to look for her. She may be in danger Gorge and Jamie went to look for Louise they sepert but they used a phone to get help. And track down Louise. Went for a long time she isn’t going back to the park she is going some were else . Louise went to the lake they all liked and fell in love with Louise sat down and did some fishing but it was getting late and cold it was also raining Haley . Louise ran to shelter Louise got soute there was a storm coming . Louise rang Jamie. Jaime picked up and said hollo it’s Louise come quick where are you the lake a couldn’t go there because it’s too far oh that one hang on am coming be quick there a storm here. OK am coming. Dad come quick why son It’s Louise I found her she’s next to me . Ok am coming don’t be too long I wont.
End of Part too.
Run
Gorge ran to Louise and Jamie but when Gorge got there it was too late Louise dint make it . Louise couldn’t fight it any more and had to let go. Gorge and Jamie are in tears Jamie called the ambulce. And told them were they are they came as quick as they can. They took away the body all her friends and family are destroyed of what happened they burred here with a Lilly . Her favourite flower they called her the imposable girl with dramas. Louise has archived everything she’s our hero. What she been though Louise will be remberd now it’s time to let her go. Her brother Jaime is badly effected he lost his best friend and dint get the change to tell her Jamie went to the grave by him selves and ended up in tears Jamie sated to talk to his sister and said am sorry not being there all the time I know your gone but I need to say this to you . You may not know this you’re my best friend and always will. You will always be in my heart. And went kissed her on grave and put down a Lilly on the grave and walked away. Gorge followed Jamie to a corner and wacked him. With a poll stick. Jamie is lying on the floor with blood. Noonday knew what will happen. Until one day the police came round to arrests Gorge he went to prison for a long time the family are hart. Brocken and what’s answers Jamie survived but with brain injurers he is very lucky to be alive. He will never forgive his dad he never sees his dad they can. They discoed to go and see Gorge and demand answers. Gorge admitted he wanted Jamie gone why his your son is he? You know he his. Don’t do it again if you do I’ll call the police. And that is a woring from us Jamie work up and told the police everything and said thank you . But the following day Gorge wacked hard and killed Jamie the Court gave Gorge a say but the court said his guilty and taken away to the cells.
Jonathan Williams .