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The Sailor

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A World war story

Based on true story .

Set in 1914

In Germany

There is a young man a  John he is a shop assisted  but was ask for going to the war he dint wanted to leave his girlfriend and his family . The  so he ingoed  them them they sent out a letter to his house were his  mum found the letter and comforted him he said am not going you need you me so dose everyone . I am letting you go . To fight . I will be ok .

End of part one.

The Great war

John went with tears running down his face he waved good bye and said I love you his mum gave him a hug and a kiss so did his dad come home our son I will John faced his biggest  challenge to go to war and win it with his solders . John went to bass were he is now a solider fighting for his county. With his solders beside him . John got injured by a bolted  a nurse  and the soldiers rushed to help John the nurse placed her hand on is hand John fell in love with Molly the Nurse . They are both fell in love with each other . The war is just being  .  John is too injured to fight anymore  he had to go home . And let his solders  win the war . And they did . They all flew back home . John and Molly got married .

End of part too.

Coming Home Party

The war has finished now everyone is going home they are going to celebrate with  a coming home party . John’s parents and everyone went to the party they gave John a huge hug John said this is my wife Molly welcome to the family Molly. Thank You

John says good bye to his parents

John is sad to let his parents go his wife Molly is beside him and said they are looking down on you. They are so prude of you .

End of part 3.

John and Molly are parents

John and Molly are parents of 3 children too boys and one girl. John is a full time dad he loves it. John misses his parents so much so we decided  to write a letter and leave it for Molly John decided  to go too a cliff . John said in letter sorry you should of had better . Molly readied it and decided she has too look for him because he is the love of my life . And his a dad . Molly knows were to look Molly found him Molly said come home  I love you   your my life if your not in it there’s no point of livening . I really love you so dose your kids you are a brave man I am not ready to lose you already  or the kids . I love you John and I want to spend my  whole life with you . Take my hand and I will keep you safe . Like you keep us safe .

End of part 3.

Grace  and Tomas Wedding

It’s Grace and Tomas  wedding day everyone came John wrote a speech for Grâce and Tomas  saying am so prude of our daughter I will always love her welcome to the family Tomas thank you dad your welcome . Dad can I have a dance of course I missed this dad me too. I love you too. Now your marred you don’t really need me . Of course I do . sometimes . I will be here . I know do miss your old life no I done it . I miss my parents but I will be ok . I know . Am going to have a dace with Tomas s His best man your brother Darren has done a speech . Ok let’s here it What to say about Grace she’s a fighter when  she lost her friend grace wanted to carry on  she never gives up what ever It’s just like our dad . our dad was when we were small going to kill him self . dad stopped it because   we wanted to see grown up . We are so prude of our dad Grace is a true happy person and for that I am truly grateful    for everything and being my big sis I love you welcome to the family Tomas thanks Darren it’s means alto . Well I really don’t know what to say or do a hug will do ok am a  reck   I din’t mean too . its good I love you too Darren and Adam  you mean everything too me . Like you mean everything to us .  Darren said to his dad what happened to our really mum you had too girlfriend  which one is our mum ? it’s time too tell what happened  all of you . can you bring them to me with Molly . Ok Is everything ok dad is time too tell you what happened with your birth mum  Christen was a lovely lady my first wife . What happened to her ? she became ill and sadly died . I promise her I will be happy and raise the kids with  someone else .  I will always love her . Can we put flowers on her gave please that’s a nice a idea let’s go.

End of part 4.

 

John revived a letter from his brothers inviting him to Freddy and Sam’s wedding . John is overjoyed and happy so he told his family about the good news. After that they placed flowers on Darren’s Adam and Grace with Tomas they went tougher to place flower on there birth mum With John’s brothers and sisters . Stay over They had a laugh .

End of part 5 .

Grace and Tomas are parents

Years and yeas went by Grace and Tomas are Parents livening with there dog Darren and Adam got married they live somewhere else .  Grace is pregnant with twins she’s happy until one day Grace is  rushed to hospital Tomas called Darren and family to get to the hospital they said why is anything ok it’s Grace she’s in hospital ok were coming don’t be long we won’t . Everyone came as quick the John is worried about Grace and her twins so he  and her brothers went in and said everything will be ok we won’t let ‘neath of you to go. The doctors said pull and it’s a baby girl what happened I can’t hear her cry . Is she ok we need to clean them . No don’t take my baby we need to . Dad everything will be ok the doctors  gave them news . That will change everything your twins are disabled. That’s ok . we have to deal with it. We are all here . Can we take them home yes what are there names . Amber and June . do what them to christened  yes. So I will get a priest to babiest them .

End of part 6.

John went to his parents grave  alone and walked on.

John decided to go to his parents gave alone planed some  flowers talked to them John said I miss you so much he deicide. To take his own life John went for a long walk to the  cliff and he decided to jump. His he alive ? The police knocked at Molly’s and the kids house they gave them bad news about John he his in hospital fighting for his  life .  Neal dead what happened he wanted to kill him self . Is ok getting there. Can we see him yes of course.

The End of John  

 

The family went to the hospital the doctors came out with more  bad news  witch will change everything the family said what is it . I got bad news it’s about John oh no what happened he sadly died . Yesterday last night am so sorry. If anything we can do please name it.

The End of part 7.

John and his soldiers have a ceremony  for what they done for the county . 

John’s family revised good news a letter to invite  them to a ceremony were all the solders and John’s family came to support them the queen is there giving out medles and a speech  . All of John’s family seated with everyone the queen readied out the names of the solders and the ones who anit one longer with us . The soldiers  came up to revise there medles . And a golden onwn badge were the queen gave out 4 names who has the golden onwn badge John Oliver Peter Jim are anmoted for the queen’s golden onwner John’s family are tearful and happy . Now they can move on . The queen said to John’s family I am so prude of being queen and for what John and his solders been though they are brave . Solders I am sorry for your lost but he has done the incurable  thanks . Now I will give you John’s medles and a golden onwer . Darren came up and recrved his dad’s things . Darren’s really upset his the best he said we miss him.

End of part 8.

Now I will add something

When we go to war those people don’t know if they live or die I am so prude of all war people we should rember them we wear a poppy to rember them. With pride all the family’s who are in the war have to fight them selfless to freedom. It’s the hardest time and still is in history . They are born fighters . That never ever gives up  .Hope wear the poppy with pride . And show you’re support .

Jonathan Williams.

Pan Returns

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Pan Returns
Part 2 of the magically adventure
Ben is now Pan he rembers what his bother mother once said Pan never knew his mother then he remberd his mum’s voice Pan is leaving in never land . And his children and Wendy and brothers. Hook and black beard are back more nasty then ever . Working tougher . To destroy Pan. Once and for all. Pan is pan called out the lost boys and Wendy and brothers are exited to see Pan . Pan and his children and Wendy and brothers went on adventure to track drown Hook black beard and pirates Pan knowns all about hook and black beard . He known’s were there are . Pan will products them all. To the death . Pan came face to face seeing Hook and Black beard Pan got his sword and Hook and Black beard fought to the death . The Children and Wendy and brothers helped Pan .Pan got back his mum’ neckless . That is the key to destroy Hook and Black Beard . It’s a powerful neckless . That his mum gave. It’s got a message . Pan still got the note . From his mum. His mum is always there . In his hart His mum is there beside him . Were she goes so will Pan both will destroy the evil. With his Children and Wendy and Brothers . Tickablbe also helps . Pan goes to find the pirates first at the ship. Then followed by his children Wendy and Brothers . They flew down to the ship . And then the war begin . They are ready for war. Pan and the lost boys and the brothers went to the ship . Wendy Tinckable are kidnapped by the pirates . What will Pan do now ? There’s a storm coming there’s a crock waiting for dinner . Pan and Hook and Black buried are starting fighting . With magic.
End of part one . Of too .
To Be Continued ……
Next Year in April .
The finely chapter .

The Water Full

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. The Water Full
. There is magical spirtful Water Full in Africa were all the spirts goes there is a secret garden where there is a beautiful water full . Were no goes it’s filled with love animals and plants were the water full Brecks . There is a god who looks down on the water full. It’s his home the gates are always closed until someone dies . They enter the new world . Of spirts where it’s very colourful everything is alive . Breathing ready if anything enters alive . And destroy their world . They are ready for anything .
. End of part one .
The Spirt Warrior
. The Spirt warrior comes down and warns there is a war coming . With Humans . How did they come down I don’t know . I am just letting you know . Thanks we have to prepper for the war and fight again . we will win we will make sure of that . They invisible so keep your eyes open and at all times . You know when they are near you . You got the power to see them they can’t see you or touch or you’re the same . But you see their feet . You can tell it’s human . When you see a human use your powers . To get ride of them by not be seen . The animals plants and all the warrior’s will help . You can’t be seen . If you do it’ all over .
6. End of part too .

7. The Demand and the water creates comes out
The Demand is here to fight the water creates comes out fighting too . To stop the Demand and all of their creates and humans come in . They have to play a game with them . Then fight . To the death . The war is here . The water demands uses there powers of spry invisible fly and sing . The Warriors and everything are ready for battle . It has begun . They will defeat there home . They will fight for their lives to safe there home . And everyone else round them .
End of part 3.
The Worm battened sun
The sun is hot and everyone is fighting in the sun . The solders pushed there emiany’s in danger . The sun came to hot and destroyed the world . The war hasn’t finished it just begun .
End of part 4.
The sound of the Drums
The war isn’t over the sun is beaming hot and everyone fights . There is a sound of drums coming there is more war coming the sound of drums is getting close . Everyone is fighting to the death . Using all there powers .
End of part 5.
The Water Full
All the creates use their powers to help the water full get’s stronger . One human fell in to the water full and the water full caught him the water full turned into a princess with long hire and naked . The human Edwin really like the princess . The princess used all her powers . To defeat and win the war . The princess doesn’t wont any friends . All she wonts is to win the war . With everyone . Edwin has fallen in love and will help to win the war too. Witch side is Edwin on ? Edwin placed a blanket on the princess . Then she’s say’s her name . Witch is Lucy . And fell in love with Edwin so quickly . They kissed Edwin promises he will help with the war . Even though he will die . For his love .
End of part 6.
The Queen is dead
The war is coming to an end there queen is dead Edwin kissed her and said I love you . Then The queen is transponfored back to the water full . And everything has changed . So has The new world .The war finely came to an end . The new world is coming .
End of part 7.
The new world
Everything has changed the animals are part of the family guarding them the water full is in full beam . With sun glowing There is a queen and king with their son . the animals can talk and one the king is a Lino . The animals haven’t finished what they stared . They mean busses . To destroy the queen . The white queen who is also very powerful and evil . She won’t everything snowy . And cold she also won’t to be queen and Her sister is a worm hearted person . That is queen to an king . To a son . Called Isaak he doesn’t know yet he will help to destroy the Snow queen with his powers . That is going to be pasted down tough all the years . With help form the animals and his parents . Isaak will break the cruse . And free everyone . And everting .
End of part 8.
The Great War
Everyone and Everything is ready for the war to end the war once and for all . Isaak leads the war it’s bloody half of everyone died in the war . Isaak came face to face with the snow queen and destroyed the snow queen once and for all. Then everything changed back Isaak’s parents went and Isaak is now king . Isaak fell in love with Lucy is now a human again . Edwin likes her too . Lucy choosed Edwin . They both feel in love with each other . The decided to leave and not to come back . Ewin went on one knee and asked Lucy to marry with a black box . And opened it up slowly it’s a demined Lucy is surprised Lucy said yes . Your my world and your mine . Lucy and Edwin left . They kissed They waved good bye . Isaak left too . It’s now finished . There’s a new place to call home . With a water full and animals with plants . And still a god looking down the animals are now sleeping and not waking up . They are dead . Spirts . Only the dead can enter the golden gates . So they don’t war . The humans are now animals . Practicing their home . Once again the lion will always be king .

End of part
Jonathan Williams

The Dark Days are here . Part 2 of the Key Locket .

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The Dark Days are here .
Part 2 of the Key Locket .
Years past the witches are still at war with other witches . There locket is with Isaack the grate . They all have to look for the locket and destroy it . The war is just begging and Amber is still Queen she will take her army to war. And destroy the locket . And never return. There is a storm coming and the witches came back to war. They have to kill everyone and the Amber found out who she really was . And destroyed the darkness her self .
End of part one .
The Darkness
The storm is powerful the witches are still fighting . Everything went dark with thunder and lighting with a bigger storm everything is fowling and being destroyed . There soon was a fire breaking out and everyone is in danger . Who will survive the blaze ? The witches are still fighting to the death . Amber was killed by her son . The sword went in and killed her Philip Jonson killed his mum Amber . And went on the run . Will he be caught or killed ? Or both . The sword is thrown in a lake to never be seen again . The sword killed alto of the army and family. Now they want revenge . The Witches send out the guards to look for Philp Jonson . And put him to death .
End of part too .
Haven or Hell
The witches are now the most powerful creates on earth . They are still looking for Philp Jonson who kill killed his mother . Years pasted the witches gave up looking till one day they sow Philip Jonson on the run . And the witches killed him . There was a lot of blood . The head is cut of. With lots of blood . They said you can’t mess with us and good bye . Philp They rolled the head down the cliff . With the key locket . Is it the end of the war now . ?Or just the began .
End of part 3
Let it burn
Years and years past . The war finished they have to burn and destroy the key locket . For no spirts and no more wars to come . They put In hot bowling water with a dash of monster blood and snot . With a very strong sprit . To destroy the locket . The Locket is the power of love and revenge . The locket is now destroyed the one person who picked up the locket is the powerful Witch . Who is really queen she with her army will destroy the other witches . The war it’s over yet . The army took place and fired at the witches . The locket is now in the hands of the evil witches . And the war is just began . All over again . The witches will fight for servile who will live and who will die ? The blood of the monster held . The locket will get destroyed by the witches . They will form an army to build a locket . and destroy the witches . The evil ones . The witches make a poison to build an army . The Goslings and other creates comes to fight . They come face to to face to end the war . The witches and all the creates are ready to fight. The locket is more than powerful . It gives a sigh to enter a new world. With more bad creates . And new heroes . Who will survive the war And who will die ? The Locket recovers a spell book with a key . To enter a new world . The evil witches wont’s the power to be strong and powerful . To get the locket and book and the key . The other witches wants them destroyed and will use all the there powers to destroy. Them and the locket and everything else. The locket is the key they need the book to destroy it . Before it’s too late . They need close the portal for all the creates not to enter. They need to use all there magic to fight the good witch used all her powers to fight be side her family. With everything
she got . The Masters and all the craters and the Witches came in the portal they are ready for war . https://www.tigerscursebook.com/images/witches/gothic%20witch%20modern.jpg
Jonathan Williams .
Some time Next Year
The finale Chapter . Will be explosive.

Flower Girl

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Flower Girl
A Chinse new year story .
That is today .
My vision .
Set in 1920 .
Let me begin
In China there are celebrating the new year with a bang a pretty young girl with a flower in her hair is walking in the streets . Jan is praying to the goods her family is calling her for a celebrating meal Jan went and ate drink and talk then decided to go to find her self . Jan went on her horse far away . To find out who she is . Then Jan went to a hidden cave . With treasure and something from her past . So Jan picked it up . and is in danger . Jan sow a sword with her family’s name on it Jan also go it Before the cave shut on her . Jan got out . And jumped back on her horse . Jan needed to know more . So she went to see granddad and grandad gave her the answers . Jan is a princess who is still looking for love . That treats her well . So Jan went off to find the one . It’s not that simple says grandad . The person has too fall in love with you in his own time. You will meet someone that you will be happy with and the person will sweep you of your feet . It will take time to find someone Be pastion . He will come don’t go to him . Now go home and you’ll see he will there soon . I promise that will happen . Your are my beautiful smart clever granddaughter . Everything will be ok I just know it. Have hope Jan .
End of part one .
Be Free
Jan went back home with everything behind her . Then a young man followed Jan to back home then the young prince Luca went to Jan’s door Luca kissed Jan is surprise and know remberd what the grandad said . it is love yes ok . Jan’s family went to the door they said be free be happy .
End of part 2.
The Dragon
Jan one day went looking for her dog .Witch went missing Jan rode on her horse to find the dog then all the sudden a dragon flew past over the villager . Berthing fire Jan and Luca tried to save the villages. From danger .
End of part 3 .
The Hot Blaze
There’s a fire spending in the village everyone is in grave danger Jan and Luca tried to rescue everyone. And kill the dragon .
End of part 4.
Safe Us
There’s a call from the other people with burns and everything there’s a voice to get help Jan and Luca saved a lot of lives. They killed the dragon .
End of part 5 .
The Celebrations
The next day Chain and other county’s around China . Hosted a party . To say happy new year and for forgive and get the past . They all got tougher and had fun till the there new is over . For another year . They keep on partying all night . Every night . With fire works and spikeslers .
Will you marry me .
On the evening of the party Luca asked Jan to marry him everyone stopped and waits for an answer . Jan said yes . Everyone clapped and Jan Luca kissed and went of . To Begin there further tougher .
End of part 6 .

A Chinse Wedding
They are still celebrating the new year it’s also the wedding of Luca and Jan everyone came to the wedding it’s not like anther wedding . Jan wore a Red with white patterns . A long Drees . And Luca wore a suite . Jan’s hair is tired up and a pink flower in her hair with a stick . With lots of make up . Luca and his best man waited for Jan to arrive then she arrived everyone turned around and said wow . She looks beautiful Jan smiled and walked down the ale . With her dad . Then Luca turned around and Jan came beside him in a few minutes they got married . Then Jan and Luca went out and everyone throw pink flowers . At them . They kissed and Jan throw a bunch of flowers and her best friend Lilly court the flowers. Lilly said thank you and then they left .
End of part 7
Jonathan Williams .

Part 2 Of the Swords Man The Dragon’s Slayer

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Part 2
Of the Swords Man
The Dragon’s Slayer
The Sword man is now a king he is ready for battle king Albert sent out his troops to go and finish the war . There is a storm with thunder and lighting . And the Dragon’s came to finish the war . It’s a bloodiest war The king killed his wife . The dragon berthed fire to the army . And they ended up dead . The king went on of the dragon’s back to acktak the army. And got out his sword and plunged into Acton . The sword floe went and stabbed the army . The darkness is here and all of the kings troops went to war . With the dragon’s and night time has come with thunder and lighting . The war just began Again ? Who will survive the bloodiest war ? The king Albert orderd his troops to finish the war . With him . It’s pure darkness now and the war is coming. Everyone is scared for their lives . Not knowing if they are going to be alive . They are prying that the war will go well. And finish the war .
End of part one .
The Best’s and Dragon’s
The war has begin and the knights are fighting to the death to kill the Beast and dragons king Albert got his sword and dived aimed it at the hart . And the dragon fell down . The beast’s came along to finish of the king . The king stabbed the beasts heart . It came dark and surer. With blood .On king Albert’s body will he die or survive ?
End of part 2 .

Revenge
King Albert survived the battle the war counties and The king Albert seeks revenge . On everyone who wanted him dead . King Albert got his sword and went to battle . With his knights and house . Ready to fight . And project the kingdom . And there people .
End of part 3 .
The king is dead
It’s a bloodiest war with revenge and sex and beterl The war is containing and of the kings emmans stabbed the king in the hart and the king fell onto the ground His knights are still fighting to the death the king is calling out for help . But no one came then a young lady Princess Carler came to the aid . And cleaned him up before putting him to rest . With candles . The war ended and they herd there king is dead . They bowed down to pay there repast . And skater ashes with flowers . They don’t know what will happen now ?
End of part 4 .
The New Kingdom
There’s now going to be a new kingdom with a new Monaco with a new family in the castle . Were the last king was buried and cowed .
End of part 5 .

A new Era
Years passed the castle and everyone is getting older it’s last one standing that takes the crown . Princess Carler became queen with her 3 son’s and Daughters besides her . She ruled the kingdom her way and everyone barred down . Princess Carler ruled the kingdom for deceases . Then one of the son’s Jude then his children then there children . The castle will keep on getting stronger and older . Till it claps
End of part 5.
Jonathan Williams .

The Dealer

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The Dealer
Set it 1958
Victorian Era
Based on true events . An incurable story in my own story . Must An amazing story with a happy ending . read .Hope you liked it . It’s a tearful and a happy story .
Let me begin. Set in South American They are also from the North West and the East . They don’t see eye to eye . They have to beg for money to get a worm meal and bedding . They have to fight for their life and everyone else . To projoed there family and friends .
There are all cowboys and Indians they are after money and revenge . They don’t see eye to eye when they come they scare are villagers and the villagers goes inside for safety . They use their guns . To fight . The villagers are poor . With very little food Money and not a worm house . All they got one lofe of bred with canlids . And baskiesk food . The cowboys and Indians came face to face . And they start shooting and pulling the bow and an arrow. With their horse .
The End of part one .
All guns Blazing
It’s coming to dorn were everyone is up they are frightened of what will happen next . The cowboys and Indians comes to face to face the war just began they pull the trigger who will get the aim? Who will survive the war ? Are the family’s in danger as well ? Can they ever stop the war ? The Sheriff came with his house and gave them a woring . Leave each other alone . And the family’s end the war . Before someone gets hurt . We’ll think about it . If you don’t your loved ones will surfer . Do you want that to happen ? If you don’t stop the war and be servile by leaving tougher . Or never come back . This is your home and ours we don’t want this anymore . Its been going on for years . Think of your family’s and how they are dealing with it .

End of part 2 .

You Owe us Money !
The very next morning were every is sleeping the cowboys and Indians knocked on the houses and demented money of everyone . They said no you owe us money . Get out before I the persistent he can’t do anything . Yes he can Gorge can build an army . To stop the this reckless war . Ok we’ll bring your money . And then the war will stop or the world will be destroyed . Who are you with ? You got family’s and friends to procojoed and were your family and friends . The Indians anti they want war . We can stop America being that like . You right. We need change . We need money. To survive. We don’t need war .
End of part 3.
Don’t Shoot!
The very next Afternoon the family’s and friends are prying the war will stop . Then a cowboy on his house said to everyone go inside it’s not over when will it be over . I don’t know . Then an Indians fired his gun at one of the villages . Then everyone came rushing to her aid . Amy’s mum stood in front of both people and said it has too end the gun who be next ? in your plans . It has to stop . You took away our money our life’s but you can’t take away our children’s life. They got their own dreams if you take away my child then you’ll pay . You’ll pay don’t worry about that .
End of part 4.
Leave and never return
You did harm to our family’s and friends we want this to end we want our money then you leave and never return . If you do we will kill you . So leave and give us our money first . Ok you win and were sorry isn’t good enough anymore . You took away are lives our dreams and freedom . You will pay . Don’t worry about that . Were said sorry . It’s not good enough . Anymore . You shouldn’t of done it . We want our money . Then leave for good . And never come back .
End of part 5 .
Money is dude
The very next morning everyone is outside for the money then a cowboy stopped and handed over the money. And said sorry . For everything . Can I see your daughter please to give me her a hug and a toy. Ok then go .Ok if that’s what you want . It is ok then so this is it . Say hollo to everyone . I gave you the money and were leaving as you wanted . See you around . Say hollo to your daughter. I can’t see her if there’s no life here.
End of part 6.
Don’t go I have fallen in love with you
That evening they all left with pride a young lady Margret has fallen in love with a cowboy . Jack and decided to go after him and tell him how he means to her. Margret rode with her house and pulled up to stop Jack leaving and said I love you I always have . They kissed . Margret said will you marry me yes you mean it yes I do I love you too . Jack decided to stay . So did everyone else. It’s the begin of a long journey .
End of part 7 .
The Wedding
It’s the day of the wedding Margret wore a beautiful long white dress her hair is curled and Jack wore a suite his best man Andy is also a cowboy getting ready for their wedding . Margret and Jack walked down the ail tougher Margret and Jack tied the knot they lived happily tougher . They ridden of in the sunset . Tougher With daughter Amy they all waved good and ridden of in the sunset . Everyone now will be happy they throw flowers and Amy caught it . They kissed and they lived happily ever after .
The End
Jonathan Williams .

The Sauges over board

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The Sauges over board
Mr Sauges is a moody sauges and his wife likes parties so Mrs sauges decided to host a sauges party . It was hot and the sauges are sling in the heat . One of the sauges went on the fall and a hungry dog ate one of the family . Mrs sauges is in tears . What will too the rest ? Can they suive ? Without being eaten Alive ?
End of part one .
Don’t eat me please
A human a small girl Jasmin picked up a sauges and ate it then it spock saying don’t eat me please . Jasmine looked at the sauges and went inside crying . Her mum said want’s wrong a sauges spock don’t be silly it can’t you try I will . Ok your right . Am hungry any way . And that’s your food . So eat them . Nice help ! glump Mum were are you in the humans scomaat were are you I don’t know . You must be close . Were next our big adventure . Where too I can’t say . Hold on to something tight . And don’t let go . Why is it bad yes it’s really bad . it’s our new life .
End of part 2 .
The flush
The sauges are fearing for their lives . The mum said hold on I am good now let go . we enter the flush it’s very smelly and damp . The humans flushed the mum said are you there yes . Good what is this said Oliver it’s our new home . Yuck really yes son it’s man made . it’s distain I know. Don’t mess around . Be good at all times . I will good you better . It’s not a playground it’s the suruscers we still can have fun ! like what . There’s a boat we go on ok but we still needs to be carful . Why the it’s our home now . Yes your right . So let’s have fun .
End of part 3 .
Play Time
It’s morning mum do you know what that means . Yes play time yay . Hollo Mr Fly and Mrs Fly why a lovely day to get dirty . Yes it is all the small little creates came out to play . Let’s play a game ok go in a plank of wood and surf on the bad water . And have fun . Look out ! where are right next to the water master is and want’s food
Like us . We are staring at him In his glooming big eyes . Now he sow us look out son his next too you opening his mouth . Come on mum with me and surf . Don’t let go what matter what . Ok mum hey that’s dad and family footing grape them . They gone we are too . This is our home watch out the wave is getting bigger . And were getting sucked in don’t let go . I won’t Mum were are I love you Oliver were are sweaty . I will find you again . Be brave my son and I’ll be there one step In front of you . I will find the family again . Don’t lose control I will get there.
End of part 4
Brocken Hearted
The wave took the Saugues away into peacs Oliver is floating away from his family. The mum is still looking for the family she doesn’t want to be alone. She sends out her love to all her family . Dose her best to reuse them . It is too late ? for them .
End of part 5 .
Eaten
The Saugues have gone to sauges heaven . To be eaten again this time in Sauges Heaven where all the sauges is alive and talking . To each other . There Lord is a Sauges ready to be eaten . They all have to bow down there Lord or they’ll be eaten too .
End of part 6 .
Jonathan Williams .

The Golden Ring .

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The Golden Ring .
It’s set in 1948
In Egypt
Let me Begin
There are Mummy’s and zombies walking about . In the heat and some young advertiser went into the tombs of Egypt . And awaken the Mummy’s and zombies . Up from the dead . Then the mummy’s risense and wanted revenge . The mummy’s and zombies went to after them . The tomb is shaking everyone human are trying too expepe . They are trapped . Is there any were out for them?
End of part of
The War is here
The Mummy’s and all dead things wonted revenge . They wanted the golden ring back to be more powerful than the rest . The golden ring opens up anther world . And the human’s won’s it as well . It’s pure evil . The world will die . If the mummy’s has it again so the human’s has to destroy them . With one of their guns to wipe them out . For good And no will get hart . They also have to destroy the golden ring. To keep away from us . The tombs are opening up again . This time the humans got out . Just in time . And never went back . They chucked a boom and run then jumped into the air . And landed safely. They looked behind them and they chucked . With the blast .
End of part too .

Going Home
The tombs are no more the advertences went on an air balloon ride . Over Egypt and many county’s then home .
End of part 3 .
Jonathan Williams .

My last Halloween story The Ghost on the train

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My last Halloween story
The Ghost on the train
It’s set in 1916
Were the Ghost was once a human and he was murdered by a sow. And the ghost will always be a ghost . Years went by and the police hasn’t done anything about the murder . The person is still walking free . There is a young girl who went on the train . Tilly went on to see some friends from uni .Tilly hasn’t got a lover anymore . They both went down the wrong track . When Tilly is looking outside the window and heard a tap a screech on the window . Tilly ignored it and went to sleep . There is her stop now and Tilly went of the train door didn’t open . Then it went . Tilly packieck and stared shouting . At the train . Is there any way out for her and the rest ? Then it went dark . There is a noise coming Tilly is now scared with everyone . Then the ghost came up and scared Tilly . And everyone else . Frank said am not here to hurt you what are you a ghost . I want hurt you like I said . Why are scaring me and everyone else I won’t revenge of the murder . You were murdered yes . I want the murder punished . Do you know who there are yes I do. And you wont me why ? to help me with my killing . Look Frank I will help you have to make a promise ok on . Let me after I help you but let everyone’s else off first . Ok I will.
End of part one
Revenge in site
That evening everyone went off the train kept on going with Tilly they somehow boned Tilly helped Frank out and then Frank became back into a human . Tilly didn’t know where is
Frank so she went looking for him . And sow a handsome man in his place looking at Tilly Frank fell in love with Tilly she also follwen in love with him as well .
Getting back on track
They both admit they got feelings . Then they both went of the train and lived happily ever after . In a castle . We’re everything changes .
End of part too.
The Train Ride
The train went into the darkness and Frank and Till are count in the hot blaze in on the train . It started to get really hot the fire is here . The hot blaze wipes though the train . Then the train exploded with everyone on the train . Frank and Tilly got out and they were trying to get out . But they didn’t . Sadly they turned back into a ghost and never reunited back into a human . They will always be lovers in spirts . This time .
End of part 3 .