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The Last Scorer

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The Last Scorer
There was once a powerful scorer who is the powerful scorer ever walked earth . His name is Sir Morgan Arthur Jake Edward timth smith . His the olders and the last scorers that is alive and walked the earth .The scorer like to called master . The scorer has got a trainer this young boy doesn’t know yet he’ll be the next and the last ever scorer . Paul is training heard to be the next scorer . His master kept on having hard work to him . The master has got to show Paul time to be the next and the next scorer Paul is on time some of the time . Now the scorer is keeping him looked up. So Paul can’t see his girlfriend and go to school . The master letted Paul go to school and see his girlfriend but come back . Before dark .
End of part one .
The Scorer’s Magic
The master is testing Paul to be the next and the best scorer ever walked earth . Emma found out Paul is going to be the next scorer . They are both fighting battles . To see if Paul is worthily entuvth to destroy . The evil . The scorer is more powerful than ever . That evening the evil big powerful wizard turns up with more wizards . And Witches . it’s gone really dark all the sudden . What are they up to ? Paul went to see Emma in the dark then Paul heard a noise be hide him . And Paul is taken to danger . Paul never made it to Emma’s house Emma is very worried and went to the scorers chambers to free Paul .
End of part too .
The Darkes Hour
The sky is very dark with a storm coming with thunder and lighting the witches and the wizards wont’s the scorer . To finish him once and for all . The scorer came to rescue Paul with girlfriend Emma . The storm is here it’s now really dark it’s a race acist time to rescue
Paul . Before it’s too late . The score came and risked his own life to rescue the new score Paul .
End of part 3.

Goodness v Evil
The Scorer came face to face with his past and they were having war over Paul . The scorer decided to fight to win back Paul he got all his powers and made a fire ball and though it then made a lighting and thunder balls . With fire ice . The evil Witches and Wizards came out fighting . To destroy the scorer . They both fly and they both fight . To the death . But who secafied it ? The sky turned dark green and blue . Were the world is in danger . The scorer last battle is coming . Emma is the one to recuse the scorer and her boyfriend Paul .But how ? Are they both alive ?
End of part 4 .
The New Scorer’s The apprentice
Emma has one change to tell his boyfriend Paul your tutor needs help . Emma decided to recuse Paul and the tutor Paul and Emma find the witches and Wizards Paul got out his stick and recused everyone . The scorer’s out there magic to stop the witches and wizards . Once and for all the old scorers was finished then Paul used his powers to reuse him . The old scorer was laying on the floor without any powers . It’s now time for Paul to take over . His got his powers and more . So Paul can destroy the witches and wizards . With all the powers he got . Emma ran towards Paul and said I love you . You’re the new apprentice . Scorer’s yes I am . You got ride of the witches and the wizards yes but they’ll will come back later in the years . To finish me of but I’ll finish them off . Once and for all if and when they came back . I’ll be ready for them .
To be continued ……………

There was once a powerful scorer who is the powerful scorer ever walked earth . His name is Sir Morgan Arthur Jake Edward timth smith . His the olders and the last scorers that is alive and walked the earth .The scorer like to called master . The scorer has got a trainer this young boy doesn’t know yet he’ll be the next and the last ever scorer . Paul is training heard to be the next scorer . His master kept on having hard work to him . The master has got to show Paul time to be the next and the next scorer Paul is on time some of the time . Now the scorer is keeping him looked up. So Paul can’t see his girlfriend and go to school . The master letted Paul go to school and see his girlfriend but come back . Before dark .
End of part one .
The Scorer’s Magic
The master is testing Paul to be the next and the best scorer ever walked earth . Emma found out Paul is going to be the next scorer . They are both fighting battles . To see if Paul is worthily entuvth to destroy . The evil . The scorer is more powerful than ever . That evening the evil big powerful wizard turns up with more wizards . And Witches . it’s gone really dark all the sudden . What are they up to ? Paul went to see Emma in the dark then Paul heard a noise be hide him . And Paul is taken to danger . Paul never made it to Emma’s house Emma is very worried and went to the scorers chambers to free Paul .
End of part too .
The Darkes Hour
The sky is very dark with a storm coming with thunder and lighting the witches and the wizards wont’s the scorer . To finish him once and for all . The scorer came to rescue Paul with girlfriend Emma . The storm is here it’s now really dark it’s a race acist time to rescue
Paul . Before it’s too late . The score came and risked his own life to rescue the new score Paul .
End of part 3.

Goodness v Evil
The Scorer came face to face with his past and they were having war over Paul . The scorer decided to fight to win back Paul he got all his powers and made a fire ball and though it then made a lighting and thunder balls . With fire ice . The evil Witches and Wizards came out fighting . To destroy the scorer . They both fly and they both fight . To the death . But who secafied it ? The sky turned dark green and blue . Were the world is in danger . The scorer last battle is coming . Emma is the one to recuse the scorer and her boyfriend Paul .But how ? Are they both alive ?
End of part 4 .
The New Scorer’s The apprentice
Emma has one change to tell his boyfriend Paul your tutor needs help . Emma decided to recuse Paul and the tutor Paul and Emma find the witches and Wizards Paul got out his stick and recused everyone . The scorer’s out there magic to stop the witches and wizards . Once and for all the old scorers was finished then Paul used his powers to reuse him . The old scorer was laying on the floor without any powers . It’s now time for Paul to take over . His got his powers and more . So Paul can destroy the witches and wizards . With all the powers he got . Emma ran towards Paul and said I love you . You’re the new apprentice . Scorer’s yes I am . You got ride of the witches and the wizards yes but they’ll will come back later in the years . To finish me of but I’ll finish them off . Once and for all if and when they came back . I’ll be ready for them .
To be continued ……………

Taking the last stand

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Taking the last stand
This story is Sic Ficon .
It stared of with a big explode where some dinosaurs and a group of sciences try to discover some import clues to see were dinosaurs live . And what they do . The sciences travailed in an arm truck it is a big place to walk in no one can be alone . Other wise they’ll be food . One young girl Jammer went of to see the dinosaurs and fed them . They loved it . The family of the girl went towards here . Slowly then all the dinosaurs looked at the family they licked their lips and went towards them . They all run before they know it they were all in danger . There’s no way out ? One of the eggs they found has hatched into a deadly dinosaur . All the birds are also after them . They said it’s war we not going to die not today or ever . Who is with me ? we are all are . Good lets go and save Earth . And everyone in dinosaur kingdom . We rule they die . They armed their guns and throw there as well . booms at the dinosaurs . Other people as well as the dinosaurs wants war . And that is what is given . They went to war . The family’s are treffilled of what is going to happen . There dad told them to hide . While the Son went out . To get really food not the fake foods . Mick meat a young girl they both liked each other . Mick and Cloe went of to find out about dinosaurs . In the meantime Cloe and Mick were both in grave danger . Were they find their lives flashed in a second . With danger . With a lot of young teenagers also trapped . In a diched a hole that they can’t get out form . It has got an army van on the side ready to explode How will anyone get out alive ?
End of part one .
A quick Escape
They found another way they got dirty really dirty they had to cruel on some mud and rocks then they found a way out . They had to run and jump before they get bunted alive . They jumped and ran . Then it Explode . Lucky they are still alive . Then turned their heads then they herd a loud bang . They all ran and the explodeon . Meanwhile the danseuses came charging and all the family’s came out . With snice’s .The dinosaurs chased them . It’s war it’s just began . They all worked tougher . To keep Earth safe from any bad creates and anyone who what’s to fight the other side .
End of part too .
The War has just began
It’s very dark day for everyone they don’t know there plan about leading the war . And who will lead the war . One young African man lead the war the has just begin . It stared to rain heavily and then there’s a storm there with a war they all got muddy and dirty . They slipped on the mod and then began to shot at the people and their family’s and the dinosaurs came charging to kill them . The people killed them . And everything that is stolen away from them .
End of part too .
One million years later
Everything is wiped out on Earth the humans are no longer humans they are alias . Finding out they are no longer humans .
Jonathan Williams .

A Stolen Child

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A Stolen Child
A true story that happens a lot .
This is my story .
It’s set in 1920 .
In Germany
Let me begin
There was once a happy young family who can’t speak any engilsh this family only speaks German they have a lovey beautiful young daughter called Neilgaer she is a princesses Neligaer went off to an engilsh and French school . Neligaer finished school . And went to go to see her boyfriend . Meanwhile there a some evil wicked people who Steele children for free . They also got Neilgaer . And chucked her in a van with everyone else .There are young children as well and mothers with their baby’s . They are selling them . The police are on the tail and ready to arrests them . For trying to sell them . The police came and arrested them . They are all free . The police took them home . Were the family’s were told they were Neal being sold . We stopped it . Thank you there not safe now . Just letting you know that . What do you mean by that . it will happen again we have to stop it we did once we can to it again . If they ever came back we’ll be ready . End of part . one .
Years went by
They never came back Neligaer deicide to go trailing with her boyfriend and never return . Neligaer went on a house with her boyfriend . They never looked back they never said good byes . They just went 4 years later they got married and they had a son and now got another son Harry . He asks what happed to his brother Nicky he died in my arms . I will always think of him I will always love him were ever Nicky is . I want to go home this is your home . No it’s not am not taking you back where it all started for me . I’ll go back no you won’t I can’t bear to lose you as well . I lost everything in my time but I always find a way to start again . And that is you are the most import person in my life . Am here to stay I will always love you I just won’t the best for you . Free everyone who was in the van I did because they found us . Who found us . the bad people ok stay with me . What are we going to do . Run ! and never look back were to anywhere . That is safe and we call home again . Take our houses . So we can run faster . Take guns and everything you find . Am not going to lose you ever . You are really import as you think you are you are my whole world . I love you too mum . Then the van pulled up and stanched Harry tight him up Harry was calling for his mum . Then harry got beaten . . Neaglige with dad Jim and their guns went on a house . And followed them . Into danger . Harry is still alive . baily berthing. What will happen to him now ? The family hard the news and is going after them as well . To find Harry alive . Neglie spotted the van that took Harry and Neglie went to see if Harry is in there . He is so Neglie took a knife and got him free . cleaned Harry up and went far as possible with Harry . They left Jim for dead they never looked back again Harry never askes about his dad it don’ts really matter to him . Harry has his mum and that is all they both wont . The mum is more closer to her son than anyone else . There bond is really close no one can brake it .
End of part too.

Going Home
They both decided to go back with their loved ones . And starting over again . The people who stole the children are now in prison.
Now I will say something this dose happen a lot we have to stop it .
Jonathan Williams .

The Cellar .

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The Cellar .
My Second Halloween story .
Be pererd .
Let me begin .
There is a haunted castle were there was a guard and a cellar where all the norty people goes . To be hanged or killed in a different way in the present day there is a family who would like a holiday away from the Halloween . They went to Scotland high lands they stayed at a haunted castle . They don’t know that until the evening . The family arrived at the castle they loved it and they looked around then it’s then evening . They were all eating tougher until they hard a noise a loud bang coming towards them they freeked what can it be they said I’ll have a look it’s probly nothing . You see it was nothing now go to bed good night dad . Then there was a tap on the widow and the door was opening Megan seemed and ran out . Everyone woke up and said want’s wrong . Something came into my room . ok I’ll leave a candle for you now to go bed please . Ok I’ll try good girl. End of part one .

The Grave yard
It came to the next evening where ever is in bed and then sundley the grave moved and the earth moved and the zombies mummy’s and a lot more creates came out from the grave and opened the door slowly and went in they went down the cellar to free the master . There is a Fridley ghost that try’s to stop them . Before the family awakes Megan herd a noisy and decided too have a look are the family going to in danger . The door slapped shut and the shadow went . The floor is Greeley and the castle is fallowing apart . The family finely work up. Megan went back to her room after breakfast and got ready and then readied a book . Then all the creates came into Megan’s room’s she then freeked the Fridley ghost called Pip . He went to the room as well Megan again freeked and all the family came in . They said what’s the problem you won’t’ believe me . I see ghosts . Ok show us I can’t or won’t because there not there are I prove it some how . Ok till you do we don’t . Megan went running to her room then there is a shadow arping then Megan sow the ghost and talked to him . Megan found out the castle is haunted . Megan has feeing’s for the ghost .
End of part too.
A loud Bang
It came morning once again the family couldn’t sleep at all of the night before they heard a lound bang coming outside .The castle what can it be say’s dad I can’t see anything says mum . I can were up in the loft . So we have to go there.
End of part 3 .
Following in love .
Megan is now in love with the ghost so found and wants to find him again . Pip came out and looked at Megan and said I once a young boy . All I need to break the ceruse is a kiss a hidden forbidden kiss . Are you that person .
End of part 4 .
The ceruse is now Brocken
Megan decided to kiss pip and brake the ceruse now pip is now transformed back into a man the is now colure the family came down and sow Megan and Pip kissing they said who is this my boyfriend . Family Pip Family why haven’t we known about it you won’t believe us that sees familiar . I think we know believe you . So you can carry on . Ok
End of part 5.
Pip and Megan love
Megan retold the story and that is why Pip is know a young handsome young man . We are know a couple that’s the story.
End of part 6.
Forbidden Kiss
The family went back home Megan and Pip are now both in love they kissed and Pip is again transformed into a price. Pip asked Megan to marry him she said yes . The castle is now transformed into colure everything has gone now form the castle . It’s a new start . For both . Jonathan Williams.
My next Halloween story is on the day .

The Misery Train Ride

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The Misery Train Ride
It’s set in 1918
In England
A young man took a train to England from France Peter had a pipe and big suit case and a bag with laptop bag . Peter got rid of the pipe and put up his suit case and other bags up then sat down with his laptop and did work a young girl sat with him and talked to him . The whole train is now under danger with a lot of trait . Peter is a cop so is the girl . They are finding out who is the tersest that wants to blow up the train . They could even be working tougher to blow up the train . What is the really story ?
End of part one .
The Black Box
The train ride is getting under wapers for danger Peter is on his laptop Peter is a undercover cop to get the black box and get rid of the black box . The young lady is also a undercover cop . They don’t know yet they are both coppers . Peter notes a guy on his phone and anther guy going to the toilet and Peter with his ear pears someone is talking to him and say’s go to the toilet and climb on the toilet and open up the code and get the black box . Ok I’ll do it . Be quick and don’t let anyone notes you. The young lady is intercede with Peter and what his doing so Emily decided to go and see him and what he dose . Peter is in shook that Emily is also under cover . And Emily want’s to help . Can Peter trust her?
End Of Part too .

Trust Me
Peter has his mission Emily said I know what your doing we got the same boss so you can trust me in your missions I also know the train is in danger it will explode soon someone has planted a boom in side the train we have to let everyone know not just yet we did to fighner it out on or shell’s how ? trust is the key you asking me to trust you yes ok is that a yes . Yes ok we did to work tougher and get the person out when someone goes to the toilet go in there too and ackat them and find out who is the source . Ok what will you do I’ll go on my laptop and give you the data to pass it on to the captain . Ok that’s sounds fun . If the captain is under treat then we tell everyone who we are ? And why were on the train .
End of part 3 .
Time
Emily tells Peter we don’t have enough time now the train is going to blow any minuet now what shall we do ? it’s time to tell everyone ok .
End of part 4
The big explodes
Emily and Peter began to tell everyone none of them listed all the sudden there was a loud bang on the train is everyone ok no then there was anther one and a big one then everyone is trapped ? Then a finely explodes while the passengers were trying to get out . Some did With the big one really came big everyone died in the explodes . Now the police has to deal with everyone’s body and their own . Now they are more deafened to arrest the people who have a big idea to have a boom on a train . Now they have look for them lucky they are the ones that exaped . The police will catch them ?
End of part 5 .
The Police Force Chase
The Police and the families have to deal with the death of their family’s death so dose everyone that got hit by the news the police is looking for the boomers with everyone and there dogs . The family want’s juice to everyone who is involved .
End of part 6 .
Catch me if can
The police finely sow the boomers and raced them and then tacked them to the floor and then arrested them and put them in the police car and said there’s no exape now . Your going down .
End of part 7.
I Spy
The boomers are in custy waiting for judgement day they family’s can’t see them and won’t . They can’t believe they done it and they don’t understand why they had to kill everyone .
End of part 8 .
Judgement Day
It’s now the day of the boomers will go down it’s Judgement Day they all stood up on the banly and the police gave them a book of promise that they must tell the truth nothing part form the truth . They took away the book and the judge said speak about don’t be so cocky young boy . You killed a lot of people on the train speak about that we didn’t do anything . That isn’t how I see it I’ll tell you if you’re going down or going free . We’ll be back to give you our vickied
End of part 9 .
Guilty
It’s day too of the court hearing the judge said all raise what’s your victed we find them guilty ok haven’t done anything take them away . Thank You all . There going down
End of part 10 .
Going Home
The boomers went home after 47 years they have changed their ways they all went home and no was at home they were asking everyone to come to house part .And celebrity a new chapter .
End Of Part 11 .
The House Party
Everyone went to the house for a party the young people don’t want a part they want a new start . They told them that . They told them they decided too leave the county for good and start fresh . Why were bad people no your not you change . You change come home . Ok no house party ok all we want is for you to be happy .
Being Free
The young people wave good bye everyone then they walked away they ran and gave them a huge hug then they left for good . Everyone else is in tears .
End of part 12 . Peter and Emily were alive still after all of that . They both deiced to leave there job and be tougher . Peter and Emily got married in secret then Emily is a mum to a baby girl then a baby boy . Peter is still with her . They know the people who boobed the train are now free they not that bothed anymore . Because they don’t woke for the police anymore.
Jonathan Williams

The Elephant whisper

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The Elephant whisper
There is man who can understand Elephant’s he is African and poor with very little money his only friend are too elephants that lost their hired . Now Jumbo has to care for them they only young . They lost everything . Including there mum and dad and there whole hired . By postres . Jumbo also lost his family Now his alone . With his elephant’s . Jumbo talks to them and help them get of danger . Jumbo projects them with his life . He won’t get anything or anyone harm his elephants . They are his family Jumbo is wearing ranges old tatted choles . And he doesn’t want to change for anyone . He will only change for his elephant’s
End of part one .
The long walk to victory
Jumbo and his too Elephants are walking to freedom . Jumbo knows this could be the last time seeing them . As they are now fully grown adults . In elephants years Jumbo and his elephant are still walking in the baking heat . Then there is a sound of more elephants coming with more people . Jumbo spotted them and told his elephants not to worry they are you kind . Then the elephants went to the herd . And the people said to jumbo who are you Jumbo yes I am who is asking . Me your mother . And you family . Is here these are your elphants too . Come here my son mum I thought I lost so did we . looked all over for you years and years and we never gave up looking .For you Do you rember what happened no ok so we’ll tell you . If you wont . yes please . I need to know what happened . Ok come with us and relive the day . You were lost . And taken what happened you were beaten up and you wore rags You were dragged though the mudd and got tied up to a pole . And more betting . Then we send out too elephants . To find out were you were . And they didn’t come back with you . We then were worried so we decided to look for you our self with more elephants . We looked and we looked but nothing but we never gave up . On looking for you . Now you know what happened . We can care for know. All those years . We lost .
End of part too
Going Home
Jumbo has found his family once again and is never going out of their sites . Jumbo is washed cleaned drained and have got new clothes to wear . His happy again His family are smiling and laughing . They can’t image not having Jumbo in their lives . They called Jumbo over and told him were very prude of you . Getting out of danger . Thank you mum . And everyone . I love you my son love you too . You do have the power to talk to elephants you’re a elephant whisper you keep them safe . They follow you they are now yours . To keep . Really mum yes you devise it they need you . And you need them . We will let you go of to expler the world and be free . But please don’t forget about us my son are you sure yes you are ready for this . To find out who you really are .
End of part 3.
A tearful good bye
Jumbo’s family hosted a party for Jumbo to say good bye to him and the elephants they pated all night and in the morning Jumbo said his good byes . To his family . They were in tear
s Jumbo gave them all a huge and said I’ll be ok we know you are a fighter . Like us . Of you go and enjoy it every minty . We always love you were you are you are little boy I know I love you too . You are not so little anymore you have grown up to a handsome man . you will always be my little boy to me . Good bye my son good everyone .
Jonathan Williams .
I also went to Africa and went to see an elephant and I rode it was the best expece I ever had . I will never forget about it my time in Africa . it was amazing out of this of this world . I have dreamt to go to Africa and I done it is a wonderful county . I would love to go back there . The People in Africa are really nice the always smile they are always happy . It’s a place where everyone must go it’s were the Lion King is born . Trust me it’s a must you will be blown away . I was and I still rember it . The people of Africa are down to earth . They would do anything for anyone . And there animals

The Bank Robby

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The Bank Robby
I witness a bank Robby took place in Bedford . While I in my car all sow was the robbers getting out a gun and said to the staff hand over the cash . Now so they did The robbers said we did it yes we did .The bank called the police but the robbers were the police undercover . To find out where the really robbers are . They are women undercover . The robbers got away with the money . They decided to come clean to everyone . They are shocked to find out the robbers are really the police undercover . Trying to find the really bank robber To put them in prison . Where they belong
. End of part one .
Going under cover
The police went under cover to catch them the really people who robbed the bank . And get all the money back . To the bank . They are really crafty they got away . And went all the banks access the area. With Jewel in their bang . They got a tracker on them . So they will be found and locked up .
End of part too .
The Big grate arrest that finishes them .
The police know knows where they are and went to them and arrested them . They gave back the money and everything else. And though them in prison .
End of part 3.
Guilty
It was court day hearing the robbers took to stand . And the judge said guilty .
The after party .
The whole comity had a party . They never said about the past . Ever again . They want to move on .
Jonathan Williams.

The Lucky Exapae

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The Lucky Exapae
There is a young driver and a career That can’t do anything . The carer has got one leg . John he is also the driver too . His young person Jonny he takes out on the road . Then John had to take the weal and turn it right round . John and said to me are you ok I said yes. But when John was driving back I sow a car that hit us again . John rushed to hospital to see me . With mum and dad thankful I was ok it was I lucky exape . Says john yes it was I gave him a big thankyou and a hug .
End of part one .
Building trust
I was ok am a fighter . So is John we are both wounded bleeding heavily there is a lot of people around them. To help and take them away .
End of part too .
Friendship
Everyone went to see John and Jonny in hospital It was a lucky one were still alive says John . Jonny stopped breathing . John is healing for help John pressed the alma and everyone came . Jonny is fighting for his life . The doctors said to everyone . Were sorry to tell you this his gone. Are you sure yes ok I best tell everyone . I best tell everyone I can if it’s any help . could you yes that’s what’s am here for . Ok come with his he ok am sorry to tell you this his gone am so sorry for your lost . do you have a child yes I do . too girls are they your world yes how old they are twins 5 years old His my best friend are they yours yes would you do anything for your kids yes . That is how I fell losing my baby son . don’t say thigs will get better it wont . I lost my son my friend . My best friend . you got your family . I best go now once again am so sorry . Thanks for giving the messes . You welcome .
Jonathan Williams.

The lost boy

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The lost boy
There is an boy with a huge loving family William didn’t know his birth parents William don’t like his other parents . So he ran away one evening by him self he was scared and alone but kept at it . Till someone stopped there car and kidnaped William now is scared freighted and most of all alone . He didn’t what the driver will do to him . His adopted parents and his birth parents had the police round they both say William is taken what do you mean his upsets no his been kidnaped . And thrown in a white van fooled by a black sports car . We are on tabs we got a camera so we can see what is happing . Find me please . We will do our best . You should go now looking for our son . We got police already please don’t tell me to my job thank you sorry . It’s ok I know your woirrd I would be too. We will find him even it kills us
End of part 1.
Taken Hostages
William is taken away by a white van and stopped to beat him up the men took him hostages . William is in grave danger . The parents herd there son is now taken hostages . And beaten . The police are on the trails . To stop the men of betting William .
End of part 2 .

On the run
The police traced them down and William too They got hellcptes around swarming around them like bees . The gang ran with a bag what is in the bang money and lodes of it . About where is William ? And his he in more danger than before . The gang and the police traced each other person down . To finish Them the police followed them wherever they go . They don’t know it They don’t know they are begging followed just yet . Then they notes and they too there gun out the police were ready to fight and put them down . They fired a gun the gang had a boom to get rid of them and then lit it the gang ran and jumped then it exploded the police were alive and really wants jutes for the family . Will they get it William is badly hurdy but found From the police William gave said thank you tell my parents I din’t mean it . You can me about it when I take you back home . Firstly a trip to the hospital to get you checked out . I’ll ring your parents to let them know your safe and your in hospital . Ok thanks Then I will speak you of about . Ok
End of part too.
The Truth
The police got to the bottom of the disarpin and told the family as well the truth has taken a stole .
End of part 3.
Going strong
The parents are thrilled William told the truth but where is now ? Is William playing with fire dose he won’t to be killed . Dose William know the gang ? Is he hiding anything else . Form where and what he did .
End of part 4
Home
William decided to go home and come clean of really happened on the day went away . And told the police everything they said thank you for the lasts news . We’ll get to the bottom of it sight away thank you for coming clean it must be hard for you I know your home now your safe away from all the gang and the bad people . I will do my best to lock them up. For a long time . Come here my son I love William and always will I love you too both of my family’s we know . you didn’t mean it . William said hang on I got someone I wont you all to meet . Image my girlfriend will you image marry me yes I will William I love you too and always . Come with me this my family and am your fenoce .
End of part 5.
Jonathan Williams.

The Island

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The Island
There was 5 young people who is on an island Tomas the elders brother is with his siblings on an epic advert they found a missing boat all batted with no one inside . Where is the captain ? And are in danger too no said there brother . we’ll be fine . The youngsters was gone too is it one of her games .Then one by one they were gone and taken to the pirates . Tomas knows there in danger so his he . What will he do Tomas sow a sword and stared to fight with it and said let my brother and sister go now . Or I’ll kill you all .you don’t have it in you . Yes I do am more a man than you ever will be. Say it again to my face don’t you’re asking for tubule I know that’s who I am rember no it’s not we know different you are a good man a good person you’re a good brother as well please don’t to it they won’t you to it . Your right . good so your listing to your brother yes I am your not worth it all of you will die . No they wont you will Dad how did you find us I just knew you were here . mum is right behind too . Are we pirates as well by blood yes we you . There’s good ones and bad one we must come to gather and kill bad one’s . Was the one’s we killed what were they bad ones but they are more . All around the island . ready for war . But the big question we want to know is are ready?
End of part one
Pirates A Ho
The Pirates came down and said a h mighty they came down the ropes and swung and did some traps for who enters there land . They have coconuts and other fruits and lodes of trees . They pick there coconuts and other fruit They love there live stley. They heard a rattling noise what is it they said let’s find out . Oh it’s just a snake . nothing to worry about . Then the pirates hard a bigger noise what is it this this time . They said let’s find out it’s pirates . Or are they ? The pirates says who are you are as well are pirates are you the good’s or bad one good like us . There will be more pirates coming . And sow the good one they all looked at each other and is ready to fight .
End of part too

Walk the plank
There is a huge pirate ship this time there the bad ones and ready to fight . They came down with swords and guns . Ready to attack the said walk the plank or we’ll push in the river with the cooks . No we have to fight for it . Go on then the sword and hit the mettle and they started . And ran after each other. To danger.
End of part 3 .
The blood on our hands
The bad pirates took the siblings away but were too . The bad pirates ones had blood on their hands the good pirates came face to face again they know the siblings are in grave danger . And followed them to their hide out . And find them not breathing . They said it’s war . The bad pirates came down and the got out there swords and is ready for a battle .
The sound of the drums
The pirates meet and is now ready for battle they boomed there place the bad pirates swiped out a sword and thread to harm the ones who step forward Then we’ll be ready . Where’s my children are they alive . Yes they are they are locked away . why they know about us . If we dear herm my children we’ll be after you and everyone . you got a woring if you don’t do want we ask then it’s war . their ship and blow up a the other ships . With a tanker the good pirates knew what to do . To finish them . They had to kill all the bad pirates . With one go at the sword.
End of part 4.
The parrot knows all
There a too parrots flying over they know what is going on and told there master that they know where the children is and took them to them . To knowing they were in danger them self’s . The captain from the crash is alive and said thank you too his parrots . Why and were is this your children was here . when ? I had my crash so you’re the captain yes . Are we in danger no am going to help you . really yes . How we know where they are keeping your children were firstly can we trust you . yes you can let’s get your children back and ready for war .
End of part 5
Going to get our children back
The captain had a good idea to call on all the parrots and the good pirates are ready now more than ever . They sneaked in and swiped out a sword and got ready to unlock the door to free their children then the bad pirates griped them and Tomas kicked him of . They all had a sword to finish them then the captain and his parrots . fished the war But witch side his he really on ?Tomas don’t trust him or his parrots and decided to kill him . Because no one really knows who he is ? His family agrees . Then they went back home the war has finished .
End of part 6 .
Jonathan Williams.