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Though the eyes A thrilling and chilling story

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Though the eyes

A thrilling and chilling story

There is a house in a mountain  top where nobody lives there is a family who bought the house not to find nothing wrong with it house is old when they enter is a smell . The family unpacked there things and got settled . They heard a noise a loud bump . And a laughter they went to see what it is but when they went higher the noise went . Until the evening  . That something opined all the doors and windows to find a way in and out the children didn’t like it what they heard and sow . As well it’s a ghost . Who lives here . And said  I was never was a ghost I a young man trying to get out . This is my house I had kids of my own and a beautiful wife . What happened me what happened . Do you want to talk about it  would help . Ok if I do please don’t judge me . I won’t ok I didn’t mean to burn down the house of bills . When I knew my family was inside I ran inside to safe them they got out but I didn’t as a pushmunt  . Know I can’t never live the house . Until someone a kind hatred person heals me . All  over and then I’ll be ready to tell someone the whole truth that is the truth . There is more .A kind headed person will take control  . For me not to this again . Ok I’ll help you don’t have to I know I won’t to thank you . What are we going to do first. Your name so I can trust you Amy What’s yours’s Charles . Know we can I trust you Amy yes you can ok that’s all I need to know . What are we going to do first . You  Amy got the power of true love . I want you to open up the portal of by truing the wheel  clock wise . Be carful when you go you only got 50  mins until it closes  You have to get a anther book to safe my family . Rember you only got 50 mins until it closes  . Go  I’ll do my best . Your wasting time .

End of part 1.

Though the key hole

 

 

50 mins is nearly up the clock is ticking fast is there any way out for Amy . Is now thinking why she is doing it could be easily be a trap . She thought . Amy found a key to a new place is this where the book is kept . And turned it clock wise and sow the book and got it   and went away with the book . Then the portal  closed Amy just got out in time. And placed the book on the wheel and span it round the ghost Charles  is pleased and gave everyone a second living change .To be reborn  again . In a different  body .

End of part 2

 The Lock

Charles and Amy pleased the lock to get though to the under world . And Charles  opened the door to the under world he knew Amy is the only one to safe them . And asked her  she said ok is it a trap no there their . Okay I’ll get see what I can do . What do I need to do . Go though  anther portal it’s open now you got longer this time but no longer  even  to be count .

End of part 3 .

Love  takes all .

Amy went in to the next portal and got up the spits of the body’s  Charles said thank you they are back now . A young man looked at Amy and feel quickly in love with the mystery young lady . Amy also fell in love with Edward .  And lead forward to kiss him . Edward enjoyed it and went on one knee and ask Amy to  marry Amy said yes . and always love you. They got married and said good bye to everyone . Then there of Charles and Molly lived  happily tougher with out there kids . Once Again Amy got some children Amy hardly see her family now . They are both happy their children  is enjoying life . And found each other . Years went by they dint know there family passed away . Until there one of their kids  haven’t seen them in years some one told them there family  died years ago .  Oh they both looked at each other don’t what to do . They placed some flowers on their graves  and stayed there . For a good long hour . They both talked about the long  further  know the kids are grown up and doing whatever . Amy and Edward  needs to know who there are . And do  it tougher Amy  sow a glibs of his little brother  then Gorgon left .   Gorgon spoke to Amy    And said why didn’t you safe me why . And left  Amy ran and cried  Edward went to see her Amy is in tears Edward said want’s wrong  my little brother appied  Gorgon and spoke to me . Oh I don’t think it was nothing . How do you know I don’t tell me was it you or your family . No why do you think that. Of what you said I only said it because anyone could take him . You promise yes . All I know it wasn’t me  and my family . Ok for that I’ll believe you .

End of part 4

The Girl in the fire line

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The Girl in the fire line

A bar manger sees some one  from her past and sleeps with him her husband don’tsnt   know about the affair  . They been seeing each other for years .One day when they were in bed tougher someone count them and filmed them . The next day Chelsea went back to her husband’s home and said have you been seeing someone no why liar  you have tell me his name now ! Darren  get out let me explain no you had your change . Beware I will get my revenge . On both of you .

End of part 1

Hosted

Danial  tied up Chelsea  and put her in his van  and drives of and took her out with her new follower and the men betted them up .  Chris said let us go now mm let me think about it you stole my wife and both of you will pay . The men lit a petal  mixed with diesel  and then put a smoker next to it and they went . Chelsea and Adam tried to get out . Before the bulling  expounding   with them . Can they get out alive ? Safely .

End of part too. 2

Breaking free

The building got hot   with smoke Chelsea tried to get a knife to free them both before they get out . They are free and the smoke is ever Chis got Chelsea  over the head and went in to the window . Then jumped right before the bulling expuling  . They both ran and then the bulling expuling . They are safe for now the police arrests Daniel   and the other men for what they did . Now Chelsea   askes  Darren to marry him Chelsea is pregnant with too beautiful   kids .

End of part 3.

Jonathan Williams.

The Big Break

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The Big Break

There are some uni and college’s greeting   then starting  over  Thomas Andy Will Jason Carl Grace Lorded Gabby Valoury   went on a holiday . A long one they said good bye to everyone at the airport and then went on the plane. There friends and family hugged them tightly  and kissed them and said don’t forget us . We want bye everyone . They went in the plane there hands slipped away and it’s time they said good bye the door closed . Shouted they said though the window  we will come back . They waved the finely time the plane took of . Everyone else doesn’t know what to do . They  walked  Slowey Away from the airport . And went back to their lives  Then they had a phone call from their friends  saying we can’t leave you behind . Come with us

End of part one .

Starting over

Everyone gets ready to leave this is it everyone  they said good bye to everyone again . They went on the plane and waved good bye to everyone They said are now on the right plane yes we are . So before we were on the wrong plane yes and we would like you as well. The plane is flaying away now all the sundun  went down and crashed . Everyone is injured or worse dead . They called the amble and helicopter’s  To recuse   them . It’s going really bad for them . Andy Will and the rest of them didn’t make it  Their friends   averred with  a helicopter to save their friends . When they are landed down the other friends sow a place to bury them . On top  of  a  mountain . With a flower . And burred them .

End of part too.

Friends  will never leave us

 

On that day they gavied round and said good bye and said we will never forget you . There family’s came down Richard said good bye to his best friend also his brother his half brother .

Rember who you came from  look inside you right in you. Believe who you are and want it really want it.

Jonathan williams.

The Big Freeze

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The Big Freeze

It’s Winter really cold and  snowy  everyone had to keep worm in their houses   cold got too much for some people they couldn’t take it any longer they died in the cold . The comity lost a big impacted  to everyone they are know to scared to go out . One young girl said yes it’s cold help the comity to be worm give them worm drinks food shelter other wise it will happen to any of us . Again we have to be period  for everything now. If that is freeing helping others so let’s  do it  . It’s a good Couse   everything is frozen  there was a group a youngsters coursing  trouble  then one of them fell in to the pond it was dangers they others were panning  his brother sow   Kiely in danger and dived  to save him and shouted help ! run to get help the other boys felt guilt what they done . They didn’t get help they brothers are in danger now . Before long there was a young girl by her shelf and then sow the boys in danger the girl rang for help .  her dad came with his team . They got the boys up in Clingfilm . Kiely went towards And  Joseph he wasn’t breathing at all  Kiely said I can’t lose you your my best friend I wont be the same without you .I love you my drear brother and always . Kiely is hold tight and not letting go the Paramcrd took Joseph to hospital Kiely is saying with him . Kiely rang up home and told them everything they came to the hospital . The thugs came back this time Kiely is there and warned them to stay away from his brother or I’ll call the police  go on who will they believe. Me I recorded it on my phone before I saved my brother . All I need to do know is to it down to the police stairion  . You will go down  what done.  If we go down everyone ells dose too . Are you threating me  maybe boo  ! you don’t scar me you’re a just a spilt prat my brother is more clever than you watch it or what you see .

End of part one.

Revenge

It was evening  the gang got a knife and went towards Kiely  sow the knife and the pond . And tried to get the knife away then the gang stated Kiely and went there was a witness  and took a photo and rang the police up . The gang went ran they didn’t know the police was behind them. Kiely is losing a lot of blood  . The witness  is now beside him . And is holding his hand . Kiely said tell my family and my little brother I tried . You can . Then Kiely stopped breathing he died the witness tried to wake him up but no response. The witness called an abulce and told them everything the abulce  came and took the body too . The police turned up at hospital and told them the gang who pushed Joseph in the pond am sorry to say this but your other son has got stabbed by them we are trying to catch them . So I have to burry both of my kids am sorry we will help to put them away. For a very long time.

End of too.

On the run

The gang are now on the run for killing both brothers the police are right behind them they don’t know what’s coming  . The police and the air force team  found the murders and tangled them to the ground . And though them in the police car . To take them away .

End of part 3 .

Court Room Drama

It’s the being of the court room drama the murders are on the stand first  they told  there  story .No one likes it  what they were saying the judge said odder now listen ok but there  lying ok . I need to know everything  well you go first then no you killer odder in the court room . Or you will go  out . No well then . The gang did lie about everything . and smiled and went slowly  the family and friends knew there game and played their own  game . The witness  is up next to the stand and told the truth and showed  the phots of what they did . The judge said were was this at the pond . Ok thank you . What will you do know ? they have been lying to you all of you Am helping the family out .  Why am the same person who got help when both of your sons were in danger in the freezing  pond. Thank you . Do you have feelings towards one of them ? it’s  ok if you do  you safed both of my kids . Bring out the murders   thank you  I truly mean it . The murders  are on the stand  the judge said you lied you did kill them didn’t  you . no you did send them away lock them up .

End of part 4 .

Judgement  day

It’s the last day of the court hearing everyone told took to the stand now it’s time to choose if there guilty  or insnters . They all chose guilty . the judge said  take them  to the their cells  . No were sorry its’s good enough anymore  .

End of part 5

Freedom

A year later  since the court hearing nothing will be the same again they don’t won’t to celebrate because they  might be realised in a year .

Now I’ll  say something a strong   messes .

Choose your friends wisely  don’t follow them in to danger that is when everyone get’s hurt  . Think carful who are your friends .

Jonathan Williams .

The Skier

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The Skier

There was a young man who went off by himself to  Canada he loves the outdoors . Karan went off by for a break away from work and  family. When got there didn’t know where the skirting sloops and a young girl Elle was going there at lifted the guy a lift . Karan said I’ll walk thanks ok then you’ll miss your holiday . How do you know ? because am your girlfriend rember were  engineered to marry .  Ok I’ll come with you . On the way  Karan walked on to find the sloped . And remberd   Elle and  went down to find her . Karan tripped and crack his head open he was layering there filled with blood . Some youngsters  were walking and they sow Karan and rush over to him Amber called the helicopter  and they came quickly . Elle was  lost too is any help . All the sudden  the sky’s went grey and began    snow heavily . it was an avalanche coming and everyone is worried and there safety  . Everyone had to feel . The Helicopter  went away with Kiran and went it was taking of the avalanche was here . And took destroyed everything in its path  .

End of part one .

Run

The Avalanche came and destroyed everything in it’s path  everyone was running down but got stirred by lost of snow . There is nowhere to hide know . It’s here .

End of part too

Lost

The snow is so tall and know can get out of it they are trying to calling for help  in a touch and  lit a scarf for the air force  and talked on a warlike talkie . And they cleared the snow . And rescued them all of them . The snow is over   and everyone in hospital getting well. But some didn’t make it. The family heard the sad news. At went stight to hospital . To see the body’s Elle was one of them and Kiran is next still next her .  But Kiran and Elle sadly died . The family’s came to see the body’s they are in tears when they sow them . Held their hands and said this shouldn’t of happened. To everth  of them. The family’s  oganas a funnel for all that died.  In a big church in a garden .

End of part 3.

A Fishes Tale

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A Fishes Tale

There was a farther and mother  fish trying to have a baby years went by the Clown fish had a small clan  . They had lost of clown Fishes . They all were named  . The same part from one . Perl  There was a sea monster coming and  . Acted and killed the Mother Peal’s Dad swam towards  her and held the least egg. When the egg hatched   dad is there taking her to school . And being there  . Peal said I love you dad . Peal Adanterd  out not knowing the riskiness  . And got captured  in a net with millions of fish . Sammy swam towards   the boat but it took of . Peal is far from home now far from dad her hero. Peal is freighted  . She is place in a tank with water Pater don’t  know what is happing she isn’t  going to quit  she’s a  fighter  she will find her way back home.  So got her mum in her   . Pearl meat a friend no friend like him . His a royal Prince  . Olli Peal had fallen  in love with him Prince Olli   . Helped Peal out . Even he can’t help the  rest  of sea ceatsers  helped . By swimming downwards  . Then they were free.  Sammy is Nevers of the wait so he decided  to go of to look for her  .  And sow Peal crawled up in a ball and went down lift her and said I will never let you go again I love you . I love too  Dad

End of part one.

Under the sea

 The Sea Moster  come back to get ride of Sammy once and for all . The Sea Monster  slived towards him and fished what he stared years ago  . The demes  came out to fish Sammy of . Peal is grown up to be an adult now   and is really in love with Price Olli.   But will Peal find out ? About Prince Olli ? And what happened to her dad ?

End of part too

Gone

Prince Olli  done    a spell towards  Peal not to find out .Anything  but the spell brock and Peal found out everything  towards her dad and her mum and her siblings . Peal went of to destroy Prince  Oil and the sea Moster . Once and for all. Peal got everyone tougher and planed there plan . Peal remberd what her dad said if you truly love someone you can change them . In to the person you what to be . So Peal went of by her self to find the one and tell Prince Oily I love you . Prince Oily was surprise  to here that and admitted his feelings too . They both killed the sea monster. With a slice  and a stab and . Prince Olli was free to marry Peal. When they kissed they became humans . And got married . With their own family . Peal can tell everyone she was once  a fish that love bracken it for every . She can’t never be part of the ocean  now . All she is a human . With love . And her own family. Peal kept her name it means new life .Peal wonders what would life be like if she didn’t meet her true love  . And she wonders if all the fishes  knows am human now. I can’t see anyone in the ocean  . Any more.    Peal wonders if she will ever be able to talk to  her glan  . Ever again . And swim in the ocean like a fish . Like before .  but this time do it like  an human . That’s the only way to talk to everyone  in the ocean . Without the humans finding out . And speak to them alone and told them all am sorry for what I become  this is me now. Sorry for everything .  I love him truly  sorry mum and dad I am a human  now with  a family . I just want to say  I will always love you. You guys but I can’t see you anymore. It doesn’t matter if were far I will always love you truly . Peal look in you . Where you belong  follow your hart Peal .  Be happy Peal if you love him really love him stay with him and your family .  I grange you to  do the right thing  .  I will always love sweetie say hollo to the family from us will do . You will always be our little girl in the water with everyone . Go be happy tell it’s time to tell everyone now I will always be  right here .  Waiting for you this will always be your home .  Then Peal went away so did the family net work.  There was a whisper  I love you forever  then the whisper went away . Quietly  with no trace the whisper had never  been there.

End of part 3 .

Jonathan Williams.

Butterfly Wings . .

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Butterfly Wings

It was a hot summer and all the birds and incest  also flowers were growing there is a family of butterfly’s  that was in a beautiful  garden filled with flowers . Then it got really hot one day and all the birds and other living animal  wanted water but they couldn’t  something is stopping them . The family of butterfly’s decided to go but one butterfly fell down and brock the wing and died the other butterfly’s rushed to the little one and swamped the butterfly up to get the loved one . The butterfly’s all decided  to leave all tougher  .  The leader had gone we need a new leader that will take us to the new world . Every animal hard about their plan and what to go with them. They all left and stared a new life it begins now.

End of part one .

 

A whole new world

They left to live a forest to be with their kind it’s hotter there and it ranis every day . When it ranis it pause down and everything  is flooded there is no way out for the animals it’s know there home. They all were making lodes of nose so was the rain then it cooled down to really hot there was a rainbow . Aping in the sky . But all the sudden was an bigger sound the animals are scared . Then came closer and closer and it shot an beautiful animal . And left with out his bullet piece . Ion fled  with his gun .

End of part too.

On the Run

Leon  was on the run for killing an animal the police are after him The Animal’s are now in grave danger  they are really worried .   The police are on the move now.  Getting ready to  be rested  . They tackled him to the ground   and rested him .

Jonathan Williams .

Now I will say something

We as humans are the destroyer of the earth  if we want a plant please think of what your doing to it.

It’s a beautiful plant .  teat it  well .

The Biscuit Family

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The Biscuit  Family

There is a biscuit  family looking very scared and nerves for their new  adventure going to explore the house . The house were everything goes missing . The biscuit family climbed down the pool and looked around for treats and thinks to take.  All the sudden there was a dog sniffing around and a young boy and a baby  what something to eat .  The biscuit family ran and jumped before everyone comes . The biscuit family went back to their hide out quickly and slowly. Mum biscuit  was doing the cleaning and the big Sis and little Bro went of in their own adventure  mum biscuit said be safe yes mum we  will . You can’t go near the humans yes mum we know . Tell me why because they will eat us right . Then there were gone. Not listening to their mum at all Ginger we can’t be here it’s only fun . Fun is  danger that is what I love

End  of part  one .

Run

Ginger and Benjie  went in a car for fun there was a sudden  movement  going in the kitchen and left sundley   . There was a boy  going for the biscuits  they left . The boy ran after the biscuits  the biscuits ran to top of the cubuers  . Benjie  slipped  Benjie ! you ok hang on am coming Ginger went down and got him . There were both in danger . Until all the biscuits came down to recue them.

End of part too.

Come and get us

The Biscuit family got a plan to run free and not be eaten when the family came round for dinner the Wife had lots of biscuits  . The biscuits slept a bit and got up quickly . The humans went after the biscuits . The Biscuits climbed down some stairs the dog sow the biscuits and jumped towards it to get it but the biscuits were sneaker when they jumped the biscuits went out . Of the window And dived though a lot of things . Not once they were eaten . They had to move away  .  before they get eaten .

Jonathan Williams .

Bon Fire

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Bon Fire 

There was 4 of the grates friends that knew each other since birth they loving  spending time tougher and there family they planed what they going to do for bon fire night Billy got a guy and a wee burl and went over to see his friends they were supped  of what he done they also went to the shops to by fireworks and sparklers  they got out there id and bough a pack of them with a box that evening they had a sleepover outside and had fun platy of fun they put there marshlolow  on the fire and stared the party with fireworks and drink . They were to close for comfort . The fireworks went off and  courses a big sense there was a big expoleon . their parents  came rushing to the seen. And found everything a mess the ambule came and the helper  came  so did the police and neighbours   they are looking for survives they are removing bit by bit till they find someone anyone alive.

End of part one

Is anyone out there?

They are still searching it’s getting late now we’ll try in the Moring again no there are kids how would you fell if that happened to you  ? We’ll get them out answer my question !  lost so help please ok come team were working all night until we find something or someone . Alive ok let’s start we need back  up to help as .  All the

sudden there was a scream  for help . They rushed over they lifted everything to get to the injured young man Paul  he had Brock his ribs and his arm  he never sow his other friends again . Paul is very luck to be alive Paul went to pay his respises life for him wont never be the same again .

End of part two

A change man

 After the events Paul decided to change his ways and stay away from trouble . He is in  a home now with other guys who don’t have a family or any one close . Paul one day sow a girl he liked and asked her out on a date they boded they fell in love and 5 years later they got married 10 years later they got their own  children .They are so happy they spend every time though with their kids  their parents  visited them too till they get week and they have to spend time with them .

Jonathan Williams.

Now I will add something

We all know why we celebrate bonfire night it’s because of Guy Focus and London it self we need to be careful   with fireworks or that will happen it’s dangers to play with fire . Always be with someone if you want to do the bon fire  it’s  down to you being safe  and safety is the key.  Of true friendship and most of all love . Love tells a story of everything of what will happen next .

 

Trick or treat

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There was once a haunted  house where there was an  ghosts and a Fridley one called. Vinney there was once a family who went to stay there it’s was there lots of  great uncle home and ants  it’s been passed down denart to denars . Now the Millis family comes to stay for a holiday everyone is worried and anxien  of going in there dad said you’ll be fine there’s nothing here anymore come In and enjoy it . Their daughter  said wow it’s big yes it is said mum you’ll love it I already have  good there son is in love with it too You see you’ll love like I have . Yes dad they carried their bags  to their rooms and then Perl’s door slammed  shouted  and Perl opened it and stormed in Joshes room and said did you slummed my door shout no why would  I don’t know if you did do it please don’t I didn’t  well you got nothing to worry about . That evening the ghosts came out to play again to play a wicked trick on Pearl and Harry they both screamed  there mum and dad came out and said is everyone ok ! we heard a scream this house is haunted I know it is I told about it get to your rooms now and behave yourself. Yes Dad but they might of sow a ghost there’s no such thing as ghosts.

End of part one.

The Ghost hunter  

The House is getting creepy new with footsteps coming through but  who is it ? it’s getting rather cold  and everything went dark . Too children are scared and don’t want to say here any more they couldn’t see anything all the herd was noises . That craped them out more then one foot step led to them it was a ghost hunter with gurgle and pofine and though it and them they didn’t like it the children asked who are you ? am a ghost hunter  . that get rids of anything like spirts . The might be nice why you doing it your farther was asking come on we need to sort it . Dad don’t harm the sprits. If you do I will never forgive you this is there home rebmer ok I won’t

do it thank you That night there was a tap on the wall and came though a ghost hollo my name is Vinnie you don’t have to  talk to me that’s fine .My name  is Perl do you live here yes with my family  I was human oh what happened may I ask it’s him the ghost hunter sucked me in  to a ghost  and so did the rest of the family. They were once human’s please  help you’re the only  one we are good his bad please help us and free me . And my family ok I’ do it  really yes thank you I will never forget that .

End of part too

My promise to you  

That evening when everyone is in bed Peal got up and tapped on the wall’s they said are you sure you want to help yes am sure ok first you need go to the room were you and you brother had been in and there’s a book you have to read carful when your in then there will be a portal leading to the after life go there and hold your breath until you’re up  if you do all of that you won’t be sucked  in then we will be humans again . I won’t let you down good. There’s no time so go we go with you only for a bit then it’s down to you ok . read the book as I told you then open up the portal then go though rember It’s down to you . rember what I told you

End of part 3 .

Fowling the hart to a lover

Perl went through the portal  to help the ghosts became humans once again and did all what they asked there was a young man who transported in a handsome man that was a ghost . Looking at Perl and said am the ghost you were looking at and had flown  in love with Perl. And went towards her and held out his hand to . And Perl followed her heart and went with Vinney and the other ghosts are normal now they can live a happily life . Vinney and Perl got married  and lived happily tougher . Till the they both died

Jonathan Williams.