The Big Freeze

It’s Winter really cold and  snowy  everyone had to keep worm in their houses   cold got too much for some people they couldn’t take it any longer they died in the cold . The comity lost a big impacted  to everyone they are know to scared to go out . One young girl said yes it’s cold help the comity to be worm give them worm drinks food shelter other wise it will happen to any of us . Again we have to be period  for everything now. If that is freeing helping others so let’s  do it  . It’s a good Couse   everything is frozen  there was a group a youngsters coursing  trouble  then one of them fell in to the pond it was dangers they others were panning  his brother sow   Kiely in danger and dived  to save him and shouted help ! run to get help the other boys felt guilt what they done . They didn’t get help they brothers are in danger now . Before long there was a young girl by her shelf and then sow the boys in danger the girl rang for help .  her dad came with his team . They got the boys up in Clingfilm . Kiely went towards And  Joseph he wasn’t breathing at all  Kiely said I can’t lose you your my best friend I wont be the same without you .I love you my drear brother and always . Kiely is hold tight and not letting go the Paramcrd took Joseph to hospital Kiely is saying with him . Kiely rang up home and told them everything they came to the hospital . The thugs came back this time Kiely is there and warned them to stay away from his brother or I’ll call the police  go on who will they believe. Me I recorded it on my phone before I saved my brother . All I need to do know is to it down to the police stairion  . You will go down  what done.  If we go down everyone ells dose too . Are you threating me  maybe boo  ! you don’t scar me you’re a just a spilt prat my brother is more clever than you watch it or what you see .

End of part one.

Revenge

It was evening  the gang got a knife and went towards Kiely  sow the knife and the pond . And tried to get the knife away then the gang stated Kiely and went there was a witness  and took a photo and rang the police up . The gang went ran they didn’t know the police was behind them. Kiely is losing a lot of blood  . The witness  is now beside him . And is holding his hand . Kiely said tell my family and my little brother I tried . You can . Then Kiely stopped breathing he died the witness tried to wake him up but no response. The witness called an abulce and told them everything the abulce  came and took the body too . The police turned up at hospital and told them the gang who pushed Joseph in the pond am sorry to say this but your other son has got stabbed by them we are trying to catch them . So I have to burry both of my kids am sorry we will help to put them away. For a very long time.

End of too.

On the run

The gang are now on the run for killing both brothers the police are right behind them they don’t know what’s coming  . The police and the air force team  found the murders and tangled them to the ground . And though them in the police car . To take them away .

End of part 3 .

Court Room Drama

It’s the being of the court room drama the murders are on the stand first  they told  there  story .No one likes it  what they were saying the judge said odder now listen ok but there  lying ok . I need to know everything  well you go first then no you killer odder in the court room . Or you will go  out . No well then . The gang did lie about everything . and smiled and went slowly  the family and friends knew there game and played their own  game . The witness  is up next to the stand and told the truth and showed  the phots of what they did . The judge said were was this at the pond . Ok thank you . What will you do know ? they have been lying to you all of you Am helping the family out .  Why am the same person who got help when both of your sons were in danger in the freezing  pond. Thank you . Do you have feelings towards one of them ? it’s  ok if you do  you safed both of my kids . Bring out the murders   thank you  I truly mean it . The murders  are on the stand  the judge said you lied you did kill them didn’t  you . no you did send them away lock them up .

End of part 4 .

Judgement  day

It’s the last day of the court hearing everyone told took to the stand now it’s time to choose if there guilty  or insnters . They all chose guilty . the judge said  take them  to the their cells  . No were sorry its’s good enough anymore  .

End of part 5

Freedom

A year later  since the court hearing nothing will be the same again they don’t won’t to celebrate because they  might be realised in a year .

Now I’ll  say something a strong   messes .

Choose your friends wisely  don’t follow them in to danger that is when everyone get’s hurt  . Think carful who are your friends .

Jonathan Williams .