There was once a grope of hikers going for a long walk but sundley there was a few spots of snow they stopped and thought about it – if  carries on what shall they do ? they dished  to go ahead . but it then got helve  and heaver then they had to run  to shelter then that shelter was desired and they had to run again. the wind swept them off the ground in to a lake. One of them could not swim, he went deeper and deer and the rest where there as well – they tried to help each other but they couldn’t, but a young man dived to save them. one  of them he couldn’t get out any more . It was getting colder for them the ambles came to see what the problem and then they could see the problem. they asked the life guides went out too look for them as well all they can see is a body so he dived under  it and  see if he could save anyone . And he did, so he called out for some more people to help him. they came as quick as they can. they were sorting   the lake un till they spotted some guys so they had a crate to drive to in some of where ok but the young hiker that count swim he truned blue face and couldn’t breathe at all. they all went  to hospital. he had a broken arm and he  couldn’t see any more. So he have to have an op – a life changing one so he  can walk again and do  anything right, but sadly, at the end of this story Andrew  sadly died. the others of the acident too where dead too they found the body’s and they dint barry them they set fire to the place to remember them by .

Jonathan